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mithen ([personal profile] mithen) wrote in [community profile] superhero_muses2018-12-07 12:03 pm

Open Thread: Oracle Hotline

At its best, my current WIP’s dialogue is…

At its best... understatedly romantic, if I'm doing it right? There's a veneer of snark and banter, but a lot of emotions right under the surface. How is the dialogue on your front? What's humming along for you?
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[personal profile] luciferxdamien 2018-12-07 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Just started a new WIP today and... Well, not really sure how to answer this one. xD One character is talking, screaming really, the other one isn't saying anything. Neither one of them is overly verbal to begin with and now... Well, now it just sucks. lol And it sucks in the "there can be no possible happy ending here" way. But that's what I get for starting a Berserk fic with Guts and Griffith. lol Dialogue is gonna be rough and hard to write. xD