Well, if you feel your dialogue is better, that means your dialogue is like, gold medal top notch stuff, because damn there have been times where I've just been simply in awe of your narration.
I do feel the same about mine, however - I am way, way better at dialogue. I used to think highly of my narration but it's gone a bit downhill over the years. Either that or my feelings about it have!
I don't really do 'WIP' these days, I'm in such a crunch that if I write it, I post it, and when I did that kind of thing it usually meant that I'd abandon it and never finish it. I just checked my archive to see if I'd kept any unpublished snippets I could share, but couldn't find anything. So...sadly I've got nothing for you. I just posted a dialogue-heavy narration-light piece though! So, while not in keeping with this weeks theme, that...exists? It's been a bad couple of months ;_;
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I do feel the same about mine, however - I am way, way better at dialogue. I used to think highly of my narration but it's gone a bit downhill over the years. Either that or my feelings about it have!
I don't really do 'WIP' these days, I'm in such a crunch that if I write it, I post it, and when I did that kind of thing it usually meant that I'd abandon it and never finish it. I just checked my archive to see if I'd kept any unpublished snippets I could share, but couldn't find anything. So...sadly I've got nothing for you. I just posted a dialogue-heavy narration-light piece though! So, while not in keeping with this weeks theme, that...exists? It's been a bad couple of months ;_;