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May. 13th, 2016 09:02 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mithen--Were there any alternate versions of these current WiPs?
Huh! I... don't think I really write alternate versions, even in my head. Or if I do, I mentally delete the alternate once I choose a new path, if that makes sense. Like a retcon, it's always been this way.
I'm struggling this week because the climax of my story seems...anti-climactic. There's a lot of talking and a button gets pushed, whooo. It's a big deal, but very little HAPPENS in a visual way. I guess one just has to find the emotional beats and push them a little harder. How about you? Any emotional takes, and how goes the writing?
Huh! I... don't think I really write alternate versions, even in my head. Or if I do, I mentally delete the alternate once I choose a new path, if that makes sense. Like a retcon, it's always been this way.
I'm struggling this week because the climax of my story seems...anti-climactic. There's a lot of talking and a button gets pushed, whooo. It's a big deal, but very little HAPPENS in a visual way. I guess one just has to find the emotional beats and push them a little harder. How about you? Any emotional takes, and how goes the writing?
