Open Thread: Oracle Hotline
Mar. 25th, 2016 12:35 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
What's your favorite line of narration from a current WiP?
From something non-comics I'm hoping to post really soon: If Sami is drunk on life, Kevin feels like he’s drunk on Sami: buoyant and bright, like he could laugh, or sing, or murder someone. You probably don't know Kevin, but suffice to say I think it captures both his relationship with Sami and his way of looking at the world.
Though interestingly, looking for this has made it clear to me that dialogue is more my forte--nearly all my favorite lines in a story are dialogue. (That's next week!) What's a line or a few lines of narration you're happy with in a WiP this week?
From something non-comics I'm hoping to post really soon: If Sami is drunk on life, Kevin feels like he’s drunk on Sami: buoyant and bright, like he could laugh, or sing, or murder someone. You probably don't know Kevin, but suffice to say I think it captures both his relationship with Sami and his way of looking at the world.
Though interestingly, looking for this has made it clear to me that dialogue is more my forte--nearly all my favorite lines in a story are dialogue. (That's next week!) What's a line or a few lines of narration you're happy with in a WiP this week?